"The crowd was boisterous, each individual transformer exchanging cheerful and excited looks with their neighbor. This fight was neither going to be very long nor very quick. Such equally matched players dancing around in the pit had only to make one fatal mistake before the other took the opportunity to make the final blow. The two wreckers battling it out were obviously inexperienced with combat. This meant that the fight would begin awkwardly and end messy. Or at least, that was what the rowdy spectators lustfully desired. They wanted to see the lifeblood of a gladiator mark the tarnished arena floor. They howled encouragement."
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Wow, I guess I'm kinda tired of this sitting on my computer, so I decided to sit down and try and finish it. :T
There's a lot of things that I don't like about it when it concerns depth, and I'm not entirely sure how I'd fix that. Any suggestions on what I could have changed would be great! That way I can use that advice on future stuff.
This was meant to be a Birthday gift for ~The-Magical-Chocobo
. I'm so sorry that I've given it to you so, so, so late. ;A; I really did mean to get it finished sooner, but I wasn't able to. Hope that's okay though!
This is a scene from ~The-Magical-Chocobo
's and I's rp we were doing a while ago.
Transformers © Hasbro
Art © ~Dzorek